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Unexpected
by Phillip Podjursky
Part 1/Part 2

Unexpected


Chapter One


Krissy was your average University student. She liked to party with her friends, as well as cram and study for her final exams at the end of the year. It was the start of winter at Miscellaneous so the pavements were lined with a light blanket of frost and snow. It was a clear, cold and sunny day with a small breeze. The morning light foot traffic arriving at the University to either get into classes early or just to get some studying done. Only a few trees still had leaves on them around the University, and with one tree in particular being the Pine tree that Krissy had the most memories. One such memory was the time she fell asleep with her head hard against the bark due to staying up all night the previous night. When she woke up her long chestnut brown hair was in such a mess, due to all of the sap, she had to skip her afternoon class in order to run home and clean it out. She did not like looking like a mess, especially in public places.


Since it was cold, Krissy had her favorite Purple Hoodie on, which as kept her warm since she got it in her senior year at High School. She bought it first of all because purple is her favorite colour, and second of all it was to support her then boyfriend who was in the Football team at the time. After she caught her boyfriend cheating on her before the school prom not only did she dump him, but she also humiliated him in front of the entire school by spreading his baby photos during prom night. Ever since then she has been wary of getting a new boyfriend. Since she was wearing her favourite hoodie she decided to wear her lucky Jeans. These jeans was made of thick denim which was worn out at the knees. They were lucky because every time she has worn them something good, big or small, has happened to her. From finding a dollor on the street to making it to Uni on time, those jeans had brought nothing but luck for her.


Krissy was sitting under the Pine tree, which was situated near her friends Lecture room. She was reading one of her old favourite books, "Tomorrow when the War began". She got it from her Auntie who lives in Australia. She loved it because she enjoyed reading about Ellie and how just her and her friends could survive an invasion of Australia. As she was reading her book she heard her friend, Emily, yell out to her, "Krissy! Sorry im late!" Krissy lifted her head and tilted her small glasses which compensated for her long sightedness. Krissy sighed, and blinked her green eyes. "About time, I almost fell asleep waiting for you. What kept you?"

"We had a substitute teacher. Our usual teacher, Mr Standley, had some conference to go to in town. We ended up having to copy down notes instead of the practicals we usually do." Emily sighed as she thought about it. Emily is studying Physics, mainly because she wants to become a Doctor. She had already studied at a Medical School, but couldnt get into the Hospitals she wanted so she decided to get another degree under her belt to try to get in. She gave the impression that she was a perfectionist, as she never arrived at Uni un prepared or didnt ever have a messy house when she had visitors. She always denys that she is a perfectionist when asked, she just says that she doesnt like to be messy. Emily scrached her short curly blond hair, "I never want to see that teacher again, he is so BORING. All he did was either write stuff on the board or just drone on in a monotone voice." Krissy chuckled and replied, "At least you dont have to go through what I have to. Computer Programming is harder than you think. When you think you have got the code licked, it only takes one simple bug to cause you hours of scouring text. For all you know it could be just an error in a video feed or something."


"Speaking of which." Emily then motioned towards Krissy"s backback resting on the ground by the tree, "Did ya get that DVD of those Scrubs episodes I asked for?" If there was one thing that those girls loved more than chocolate, it was the TV show "Scrubs". Krissy had a collection of DVDs spanning nearly all of the episodes, par some of the recent seasons. It was one of those shows where they did not want to miss a single episode. Otherwise they would try to beg, steal or borrow either through the internet or through their circle of friends. Krissy then covered her face with her hand and muttered "Crap" in a shocked voice. "Damnit im sorry Emily, I slept in by mistake this morning and I had to rush out the door in order to make it on time. I forgot all about it." She then kicked herself mentaly for staying up watching those episodes that she was meant to let Emily borrow late last night.


Emily then groaned with dissapointment, "Man, I was looking forward to watching that episode before I had to do my test paper on Newtons Theories. Any chance you could get it to me before afternoon classes end? Its only for half an hour, Or don"t you have the afternoon off?" Emily"s blue eyes then looked expectantly at Krissy, who was starting to frown. "I was planning to get some shut eye under the tree, but I guess I"ll hafta run home to get it to you in time. I"ttle be the last time I will do this for ya though Em."


Emily"s eyes then lit up with joy, "Oh thank you! You are a real friend!" Emily then reached down and gave Krissy a big hug. As Krissy started to get up and grab her backpack she said to Emily, "I"ll meet you back here in about an hour. You are so lucky my house is a 15 minute bike ride from here." With this they both headed off.



Jack had just finished his show at the park, and then decided to pack up. After all of the lunchtime foot traffic had gone there was really no point in staying in the park. Mainly due to the fact that it was gettting a lot colder. With Sandra still on the loose and her dark influence gripping the town, less and less people turn up to watch him. Sometimes he wonders himself why he keeps doing these shows when hardly anyone comes to watch. With a slight shiver he wrapped his plaid jacket a bit tighter around him and held Tomie close to his chest. "Why do you keep on doing these shows during winter Jack?" Tomie asked Jack telepathicly, "There really isnt much point with Sandra"s influence spreading across the town." Jack then held out Tomie, smiled, remembered his first show with Wally and said to Tomie, "Even if I get through to one person a day, thats enough encouragement for me."

"If you say so." Tomie replyed.


With Tomie in hand he looked at his watch, "Ten past One?!" He thought to himself, "I better get home."


He then started to run out of the park and down the frosty footpath. Since the lunch hour had gone, most of the foot traffic had indeed dissapeared into the many small office blocks that lined the street. The odd Shopper was about the many stores that lined the ground floor of the old 1960"s style buildings. The wind was really howling now, creating a tailwind behind Jack. Jack had to hurry home because he couldn"t allow too much time to be wasted in the park. He had to look for Sandra now that she had dissapeared from his radar. He was so fixed in his thoughts and theories that he did not see the Bike as he was running around a corner.



Krissy walked up to her orange and black Avanti Bicycle, which was in the carpark, while putting on her black fingerless gloves. She then unlocked her bike, put on her helmet and started to peddle out of the University grounds and into the street.


After a near miss on the road she usually tries to ride on (or at least near to it as possible) the footpath, even though shes not supposed to. She doesn"t usually ride as fast, but she had to get back to her flat pretty quickly, she knew that Emily did not like waiting. Last time she made Emily wait it was when they went to the movies a month or so ago. She had arrived 15 to 20 minutes late and they had missed the starting credits of the movie. Krissy tried to say sorry to Emily, but she just ended up being grumpy for a while. In the end Emily forgave Krissy, but she didnt try to be late again after that.


Once she saw the park walls she was nearly home. All she had to do then was turn round the corner, stop at the apartment block just down the road and shes there. Breathing heavily after a fast bike ride she checked her watch, "Ten past One, gotta be a new record for me." As she looked up from her watch she saw a man wearing a plaid jacket walking round the corner. As a reflex she immediately slammed on the brakes, but it was too late. As she tried to turn to try to avoid him her bike slid out from underneath her, making her land hard on the ground and knocking over the man in the process.


Pain immediately shot through her leg and shoulder, causing her to yell in pain. As the man was knocked back, the force of the impact caused him to release the book that he was holding making it fly into the air. "NO!" Screamed out the man. His scream startled Krissy, and she tried to get up to apologise. Pain ripped through her right leg as she stood up, almost colapsing again onto the ground. Both Krissy and the man then looked up to the book, which was now half open. Twisting and turning it flew back down. The man in the plaid jacket covered his face, while the girl in tears from the pain started to apologise, * sob * "I"m sorr--"

Before she could finish the book landed with the spine facing the man and a blinding light burst out from the pages as it slammed onto the ground. The light overwhelmed Krissy, who was already dazed by the accident was thrown over her now totaled bicycle and onto the open road. The man in the plaid jacket then unsheilded his eyes and looked for the girl, which was now in the middle of the road. In horror he tried to gasp out while reaching out his hand, "watchout!" Krissy sat up, now in shock from all of the pain looked behind her.


Chapter Two


Grant had just finished helping the Chiller boys load the last of the beef carcasses into the trailer of his truck and had sorted out the paperwork with the Supervisor. "Just got that last load of pigs to do after lunch right Gary?" Gary, the Supervisor, quickly glanced at the loadout sheet and replyed. "Yea, just one more. I"ll see ya after lunch then."

"Yep Seeya." Grant then glanced at the clock (12:10pm), got changed out of his white overalls and into his Shorts and Jersey, put his beanie on his bald head and started up the truck. "If I get this load to Westmere quick enough I might just be able to get myself a proper lunch." He thought to himself. He then reached for the key in the ignition, started the truck, put it in gear and off he went.



He was running late, that stop for petrol had cost him 20 minutes when he found out he had a flat tyre at the back of his trailer. He was on his way back to the Abbitors when he thought to himself, "I will just hafta take my old shortcut if im gonna make it on time." With a twist of the steering wheel he then turned towards the road that lead straight past the park.



Krissy then realised that there was a truck coming straight at her, and there was nothing that she could do. Closing her eyes she whispered, "Forgive me God..." A few seconds later the truck driver despretly tried to push the breaks without jacknifing. The driver and the man on the side of the road shielded their eyes, not wanting to look at the death that was about to ensure. Sure enough, there was a violently loud * WHAP *



"SHES NOT BREATHING!" Yelled out the Paramedic, "Quick! Get her into the Ambulance, ill peform CPR on the way to the Hospital!" the Paramedic then signaled to the Ambulance Driver, "On my count, lift her onto the stretcher. One, two, three, LIFT!" With one swift movement Krissy was lifted onto the stretcher, which was then raised and put in the ambulance. A crowd had gathered with a police cordon to try to keep them away from the crash. A News team had also gathered near the cordon, documenting this tradgety. With a second ambulance tending to the truckdriver and the man who was hit by the bicycle, the Driver then sped off with lights and sirens blasing. Glancing at the police cordon which had now surrouned the immediate area, the driver nodded to the Officer at the edge of the cordon.


Inside the Ambulance the Paramedic was trying to keep Krissy alive. "Come ON! DON"T DIE ON ME NOW!" The paramedic then furiously pressed onto her chest while counting "one two three four five" then put her ear just above Krissys airways. "Damnit, still not breathing." With nose blocked and jaw held open she breathed oxygen into her lungs, which made Krissy"s chest rise and fall with each breath.



"Now don"t forget to answer BOTH questions in the test paper that im going to give you--" Mr Barrable, the Substitute teacher for Emily"s Physics lecture, was abruptly interupted by a student bursting into the room. "Sir! Turn on the radio! Quickly!" Blurted out the teen.

"I don"t think you should be here young man..." Mr Barrable sternly said to the teen.

"Sir, trust me, just turn on the radio!" Replyed the teen.


The teacher then reached for the stereo at the front of the lecture room, turned on the radio and then immediately turned it up.


"-- eaking News! A serious incident has occurred on the corner of Park Ave and Corrent Street at noon today with a truck coliding with a Student believed to have studied at Miscellaneous University. The Police hasn"t released any details about the victim of the accident but it is believed from witnesses that the Girl tried to swerve away from a person on the footpath that she was about to hit and crashed onto the road, right into the path of an oncoming truck. She is said to be in a critical condition. Police are looking for anyone who had seen the accident and they are launching an investigation."


Stunned silence fell upon the lecture room. Emily sat there in shock worrying about Krissy.



At the hospital Krissy was being wheeled on a stretcher, with the Paramedic still performing CPR whilst kneeling above Krissy on the stretcher. The Ambulance driver was at the back of the stretcher , pushing it towards the ER Theatre. An intern was holding up a bag of blood which was being fed into Krissy"s arm. "OK, whats the situation?" Asked the Doctor who was following the stretcher. "Female student who was hit by a truck following a bicycle crash. Possible broken Hips, Knees, Shoulders and Ribs, Internal Bleeding, Collapsed lungs, and also has a large head trauma. I don"t think she will last very long unless we act soon." answered the Paramedic.


They reached the ER Theatre and lifted Krissy onto the bed. A constant flatline then filled the room as she was hooked up to the EKG, causing an even more tense atmosphere. "Get the Defib ready!" The Defibulator was then wheeled quickly over beside Krissy"s bed and got turned on and set up. As that was happening the doctor unzipped what was left of the Hoodie and pushed Krissy"s shirt down to expose the chest. The paddles were then handed over to the doctor.

"CLEAR!"

Krissy"s body jumped as the paddles sent an electric shock through her body. But to no avail did it start her heart.

"Again, CLEAR!"

Krissy"s body again jumped, causing the flatline to remain unchanged.

"Come on! COME ON! CLEAR"

For a third time Krissy"s body remained unchanged from its flatline state. With this sad news, the Doctor then signaled one of the nearby nurses to turn off the EKG. With a tear in her eye the Doctor then glanced at the clock, "Time of Death, five past two pm."

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